The Cartographer’s Error
Logline: A royal mapmaker who learns her charts reshape the world must decide whether to redraw a border that would erase the village she was born in.
1. The pitch — Ysolde Mar has spent nineteen years drawing the coastline of a kingdom that keeps disagreeing with her. Rivers move. Villages sit two miles from where the survey put them. She has been blamed, fined and nearly dismissed for errors she did not make — until the night she draws a bridge that was never built, and wakes to find people crossing it.
2. Main characters
Ysolde Mar — royal cartographer; wants to be believed; needs to forgive her own mother; flaw: she trusts ink over people; secret: she drew her sister out of the world at eleven and has never told anyone.
Aldric Venn — the Surveyor General; wants an accurate kingdom at any cost; needs to admit he is afraid of her; secret: he has known what she can do for six years.
5. Story structure — Act One ends when the bridge appears and Ysolde tests her gift on something small and living. Midpoint: she erases a border skirmish and learns the dead do not come back with the land. Act Two closes on the all is lost beat: the Crown seizes her charts, and the sea starts advancing on the map nobody is correcting.


